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PostSubject: Prologue   Prologue EmptyThu Oct 08, 2009 12:38 pm

I got bored one day... So I began working on a Story... It won't be a 700 page epic masterpiece but as a "sneak peak" I will post a prologue here.


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(By the way, I would REALLY suggest fixing it so the spoiler text color is black and not silver... It blends in with the spoiler, I had to manual change it.)
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyThu Oct 08, 2009 8:05 pm

Nice story, when we get back on track we will has some story contests.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 8:09 pm

(By the way, I am lying... I actually haven't continued on that at all, I got bored one day so I wrote that up. I have been planning on working more on it eventually but I am lazy. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 8:29 pm

Yea, I do that all the time. I know how you feel.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 8:50 pm

another story writer here, well LETS READ

~~~~AFTER READING~~~~
i wish there were more, it interests me, i really want to know who "him" is.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 8:52 pm

The Devil....
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 8:56 pm

wow, that is odd, i did not get this impression from the text... OR I JUST MISSED IT, but thanks for the clarification
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 9:00 pm

I was honestly not thinking of adding the "devil" into it at all... It is not supposed to be a very "religious" thing. It is set in the old days, supposed to be a mythic kind of thing.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 9:07 pm

Well, reading the whole...

He told me to kill, and he was crying meaning it was forced, and the devil forces people to do things.

Just a theory.
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 9:12 pm

That is a simple suspenseful notion. It is meant to make you think about it... I just to add to the mystery. In all honesty I don't even know who "he" is yet. I like just writing as I go rather than creating a storyboard. Then it makes it like I am reading the book rather than writing it and I don't lose interest as fast. (that worked well.) But I never like how books/movies with satan or something like that turn out. Of course there will be religion in it due to the fact that in the medieval days it was a huge part of life. But I am not basing it off of it. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Prologue   Prologue EmptyThu May 27, 2010 8:22 pm

I wish you would come back and complete your goddamn story.

Hertis woke up in a cold sweat, and then WHAT?

Did he get shot by some robber that's gonna rob his house? Is he gonna find some dead girl next to him? Is he gonna find some crazy gym teacher under his sheets doing inapproriate things to him?

WHAT? I say we complete his story or somefin....

Oh, and I responded to this dead thread because I wanted "EmperorZen" to be listed as the last post for ever forum section.
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